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CM: NightF0x and Zenith Couple's Icons by IndigoTheFennec (critique requested)
Commission for NightF0x and his boyfriend, Zenith (FA link pending)
This turned out way better than I'd originally expected. Still not the best around, but I hope it's passable for my very first paid commission EVAR. Kissing Furries are fun to draw, admittedly~
Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated! Please leave a comment, or even better, fill out this form (or the Spanish version!).
Characters (c) their respective owners
Art (c) IndigoTheFennec
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Good use of pencil strokes to give the illusion of texture on the crow. I'm not really sure if the swirl is a design or an emotion indicator, but I like the look. The fox's muzzle is a bit thick. Kissing is hard to do because of positioning, and you haven't done a bad job. However, because you've cut off everything from the neck down it's hard to judge your abilities: you've got a lot of floating heads in your gallery.
I read your post regarding attracting attention and feedback on the forums, so I thought I'd take a look. I know the feeling and I hope this has been helpful.