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Lontra Mark - Rain Dance (WiP) by LunaMoon (critique requested)

Lontra Mark - Rain Dance (WiP) (critique requested)

LunaMoon

This is a solid wip of a track I've been doing for a long while now. The cover art is even ready for it as you can see highlighted on my profile.
It's also supposed to be a vocal song but as I'm not a singer it will be just instrumental for now.

It's a pop song about a fear of feeling joy knowing it will not last longer until you're down again, so why even bother feeling alright? That's mostly it... could be a song for euphoria as well

ps: I'll probably change that first melody because I think I did it on a different scale

Your rain dance made me wonder
If I'm afraid of the thunder
I must confess that I'm afraid to be alright
Your compass made me wander
This joy dwells in my slumber
I won't accept it 'cause it's living in my mind

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    It sounds like it's pretty good so far! :)